1. The introduction flow pretty well into the topic sentence and down to the conclusion. Yes, the first sentence catch the reader's attention and is relevant to the topic.
2. The thesis statement: The similarities of my great grandparents and I prepare pho bo to the differences of obtaining the ingredients for the pho bo.
3. This paper need to be more organized.. the conclusion talks about eating more natural like the old days.
4. Need more work on grammar, puntuations and word usage.
5.Yes, the source is written out clearly. The reference is done correctly.
6. The greatest strength is about the similarities and differences in the way of ingredients to eating at home and obtain ingredients for pho bo with great grandparents.
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